This is much better Geomi. The image is much stronger, altough you might have considered the artis have a direct mode of address, this may have engaged the potential audience more. Make sure that you say who he is and make the article sound exciting! Also is this a weekly or monthly magazine? £1.99 might be too expensive for a weekly but also too cheap for a monthly. Is it a fortnightly magazine?
In addition there is not much text on your front cover. The front cover is supposed to 'sell' your magazine to the potential audience. Tell them what's inside! What bands will they find inside? What types of articles? Make sure that the language you use is appropriate for the particular audience. Also, make sure that you check your audience survey: are you giving the audience what they want?
This is much better Geomi. The image is much stronger, altough you might have considered the artis have a direct mode of address, this may have engaged the potential audience more. Make sure that you say who he is and make the article sound exciting! Also is this a weekly or monthly magazine? £1.99 might be too expensive for a weekly but also too cheap for a monthly. Is it a fortnightly magazine?
ReplyDeleteIn addition there is not much text on your front cover. The front cover is supposed to 'sell' your magazine to the potential audience. Tell them what's inside! What bands will they find inside? What types of articles? Make sure that the language you use is appropriate for the particular audience. Also, make sure that you check your audience survey: are you giving the audience what they want?
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